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The first couple of times John has sex with Rodney aren't even that good. Not that they're bad, exactly, it's just that they're still figuring each other out.

They get back from a mission where they'd accidentally walked in -- actually, it was more like walking by, what with the fact that none of the little hut-buildings had doors -- on a couple going at it hot and heavy, the woman on her back at the edge of the tall bed, the man standing between her widespread thighs and thrusting into her hard and fast. John and Rodney exchange one hot, slightly embarassed glance and keep walking, and John figures they have an unspoken agreement never to talk about it. But when they get back to Atlantis, Rodney walks John to his quarters and then comes inside, fumbles John up against the wall and kisses him, and... well, it would be rude to push him away, plus John has an erection that won't quit and getting off with someone sounds a hell of a lot better than doing it on his own. They're half undressed, fumbling with each other's slacks and underwear and fuck yes, Rodney's hand wraps around John's dick, and he almost comes right then. Then Rodney's hand tightens and John does come, sudden and unexpected, gasping. Rodney shoves him down onto the bed and rubs off against his hip, breath hot in John's ear. He moans when his dick throbs and dampens the bottom of John's t-shirt, but doesn't stop moving until it's done. Then he collapses on top of John, too heavy.

Five minutes later, Rodney gets up, looking pleased, and says, "We should do this again some time."

John thinks, Or maybe not, but, strangely, instead of saying that, he nods and goes into the bathroom to clean up.

By the time he comes out, Rodney's gone.

The second time is after Carson dies. There's too much hurt in Rodney's eyes for John to ignore, and knowing that there's something he can do to take it away, even briefly... He shows up at Rodney's quarters around midnight with a bottle of liquor he borrowed from Elizabeth -- it's still borrowing even though he didn't ask her, because he'll replace it when he can -- and they share a couple of drinks, then go to bed. He even lets Rodney fuck him, something he hasn't let anyone do for a long time, and it's okay. Not good, not bad. Rodney fucks him and comes and falls asleep almost immediately, and John gets dressed looking at him, watching his peacefully sleeping face as he's zipping up his slacks.

He doesn't leave a note, but Rodney smiles at him when they pass in the hallway the next day, both of them talking to the other people they're walking with, and John knows it was worth it.

The third time -- the time that's more an accident than anything else -- is different. It's early morning, and for some reason they're both up, and for some reason they take a walk way out on one of the piers, and they're sitting, looking out across the water. John turns his head and looks at Rodney, whose eyes are even more blue than the water, and then somehow they're kissing. There's no reason for it; it just happens. Rodney's mouth is a little bit salty, like he's been inhaling the sea air for too long, and John can't get enough of it. They kiss until they're both breathless, then pull back and look at each other. Rodney's grin is as wide as the one John can feel on his own face, and he stands up and tugs at John's hand.

They go back to John's quarters and proceed to have what is inarguably the best sex of John's life. After, he's tucked up against Rodney's back with an arm around his waist. He can feel the rumble as Rodney asks, "Is it just me, or was that really good?"

John grins. "Yeah," he says. "That was really good."

"I mean, even better than before," Rodney hastens to add. "Because that was good, too."

"This was better," John agrees, stroking his hand along Rodney's hip, feeling the hair prickle against his palm and fingers. "We should definitely do it again. Soon. And often."

"Definitely," Rodney says, and after that they're both quiet.

Date: 2007-07-26 06:03 pm (UTC)
wolfshark: (Default)
From: [personal profile] wolfshark
Oh, me like!

Date: 2007-07-26 07:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wesleysgirl.livejournal.com
Thank you! :-)

Date: 2007-07-26 06:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elliotpp.livejournal.com
HOT! *fidget*fidget*

Date: 2007-07-26 07:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wesleysgirl.livejournal.com
Thank you! :-)

Date: 2007-07-26 06:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] beadattitude.livejournal.com
This makes me so happy!!! ::wriggles::

Date: 2007-07-26 07:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wesleysgirl.livejournal.com
Thank you! (Kitty! My cat is currently licking my arm obsessively. Her tongue is SO ROUGH. Ow.)

Date: 2007-07-26 06:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] purelyironic.livejournal.com
That was hot, but it hurt too. Rodney being so completely oblivious to John's thoughts and especially the second time: John enduring it without feeling good about it, just because he wants to make Rodney feel better.

The third time luckily was better (even though Rodney's still oblivious, John just has caught up ;)

Date: 2007-07-26 07:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wesleysgirl.livejournal.com
I know! I think this story really needs to be a lot longer and more involved, but I don't have time, LOL. But thank you!

Date: 2007-07-26 06:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mmmchelle.livejournal.com
I love it when it the sex isn't perfect but it gets better. Thank you.

Date: 2007-07-26 07:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wesleysgirl.livejournal.com
Me, too. I really think this story should have been longer and more complex, but I just didn't have time to do more than a quickie, LOL. Thank you!

Date: 2007-07-26 07:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deaver.livejournal.com
Awwww, thanks for this!

Date: 2007-07-26 07:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wesleysgirl.livejournal.com
Thank YOU. :-)

Date: 2007-07-26 07:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] altyronsmaker.livejournal.com
*sigh* Yummy. Good stuff.

Date: 2007-07-26 07:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wesleysgirl.livejournal.com
Thank you! :-)

Date: 2007-07-26 07:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flaming-muse.livejournal.com
Happy happy. I'm a sucker for fic with imperfect sex turning into great sex. :)

Date: 2007-07-26 07:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wesleysgirl.livejournal.com
Thank you! I really like imperfect sex; it's so true to life, and sometimes funny, and then it has all that POTENTIAL to improve.

(I have an RB plot bunny, LOL! Just what I need. And I don't think I could write it alone. I really, really need to sit down with the Angel/Wes story and sort it out.)

Date: 2007-07-26 07:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flaming-muse.livejournal.com
How funny! I was just thinking today that I should offer to start the first rewriting pass on some of the troublesome scenes in the Angel/Wes to see if we can get the end on track. I had brainstorms! I think there are only a couple that need to be rewritten mostly/entirely, but until they're right the rest won't feel right, you know? After the big pieces are there the rest will just be tweaking and a few new scenes that we could tag on.

And I'm always happy to write more RB with you. :)

Date: 2007-07-26 07:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wesleysgirl.livejournal.com
[I'm working on the Angel/Wes RIGHT NOW. *Gasp*]

Date: 2007-07-26 08:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flaming-muse.livejournal.com
OMG! So exciting!

E-mail me and tell me what you're working on! Maybe we had the same brainstorm! :)

Date: 2007-07-26 07:24 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] monanotlisa.livejournal.com
Oh, WG. This is wonderful. You don't know how much this cheered me up after my pain/killer-filled day. Your John and Rodney here are especially good, I think, true to themselves on the show, ultimately true to the feelings they both let develop. Thank you.

Date: 2007-07-26 07:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wesleysgirl.livejournal.com
Thank you! *Hugs* I hope you feel better, hon.

Date: 2007-07-26 07:56 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] ladycat777.livejournal.com
Oh, yes. I love imperfect sex even if, yes, it hurts to see that Rodney's oblivious not because he's being cruel, but because John doesn't want him to know. It's okay for him to be... just okay about it.

Hurty but wonderful.

Date: 2007-07-27 02:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wesleysgirl.livejournal.com
Thank you! *Hugs*

Date: 2007-07-26 08:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] janedavitt.livejournal.com
I love the way you write these two ::happy sigh:: It's so real and believable.

Date: 2007-07-27 02:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wesleysgirl.livejournal.com
Thank you! *Loves*

Date: 2007-07-27 12:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xylohypha.livejournal.com
I like the progression here, very much.

Date: 2007-07-27 02:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wesleysgirl.livejournal.com
Thank you! :-)

Date: 2007-07-27 12:24 am (UTC)
aryas_zehral: (Default)
From: [personal profile] aryas_zehral
:D I like. It's kinda sweet.

Date: 2007-07-27 02:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wesleysgirl.livejournal.com
Thanks! :-)

Date: 2007-07-27 02:35 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] aurora
Oh, what a great story!

Date: 2007-07-27 06:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wesleysgirl.livejournal.com
Thank you! :-)

Date: 2007-07-27 05:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] panisdead.livejournal.com
Here on Monanotlisa's rec--I like the J/R dynamic here very much.

Date: 2007-07-27 06:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wesleysgirl.livejournal.com
Thank you! :-)

Date: 2007-07-28 05:59 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] anna_luna
:D This was great! You really have wonderful grasp on John and Rodney and the way they interact! Thanks!

Date: 2007-07-28 01:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wesleysgirl.livejournal.com
Thank you! :-)

Date: 2007-07-28 06:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zabbers.livejournal.com
I love that the porny porny porny makes me go 'awww that's so sweeeet!'

Date: 2007-07-28 01:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wesleysgirl.livejournal.com
Hee! Thank you.

Date: 2007-07-28 09:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raincitygirl.livejournal.com
Oh, this is just CUTE. I love that it's not fireworks and tornados the first time, that they kind of work their way up there.

Date: 2007-07-28 01:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wesleysgirl.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm a big fan of cute, even though I don't write it all that often. :-)

Date: 2007-07-29 09:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] viciouscats.livejournal.com
Awww, sweet and hot! The best combination! :)

Date: 2007-07-29 11:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wesleysgirl.livejournal.com
Thank you! :-)

Date: 2007-07-29 12:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lavvyan.livejournal.com
"We should definitely do it again. Soon. And often."



And I love how John has comfort sex with Rodney, just because it's something he can do to make the vulnerable look go away.

Date: 2007-07-29 11:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wesleysgirl.livejournal.com
Thank you! I totally think John would rather do that -- even if the sex was only mediocre than, you know, have to TALK to Rodney, LOL. :-)

Date: 2007-07-31 10:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lilyfarfalla.livejournal.com
I just love this entirely.

The start of the third time, with the constant refrain of "some reason, accident, no reason, somehow"....I feel like it both describes the moment so well (it just happens, naturally and not for a reason outside of them), but also is so in John's "never see it coming" voice.

Date: 2007-08-01 12:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wesleysgirl.livejournal.com
Thank you! :-)

Date: 2008-01-30 03:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] frickinfrackin.livejournal.com
and... well, it would be rude to push him away

Oh god, I can totally see this being the reason for 95% of Sheppard's sexual encounters.

As with all your other stories, I much enjoyed reading this. :)

Date: 2008-01-30 02:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wesleysgirl.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! :-)

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