(Notes: John/Rodney Earth AU)

[wesleysgirl]

Speaking of the John/Rodney Earth AU, is there anything in particular people would like to see in the fic? (I'm certainly not making any promises, but I've got a list of all the upcoming scenes and the issues that need to be dealt with, and since I'm not often even this organized when writing a story, I figured I might as well ask.) I said to someone in comments the other day that I thought there were maybe 3-6 more parts left in the story but looking at my list now I think I'm looking at a minimum of 5-6 and probably more.

I'm not going to post the list because I don't want to spoil anyone, and if you don't like spoilers you might not want to read comments in case anyone makes a suggestion that ends up making its way into the fic. My current intention is to work on the story until it's done, posting some every day or every other day.

Comments

[monanotlisa.livejournal.com]

Oooh! I keep thinking about this your story. *cough*

For what it's worth, I'd love a slow seduction, and the way you set them up, it'd even be a mutual one -- imperfect moments, hesitation, onging and lust and a heat underneath that only slowly comes out, maybe a bit of bafflement even if this John doesn't seem the candidate for a full-blown freak-out. Definitely small steps, and many details, yes. Details are great. I don't mind explicit scenes, either, and these here would be so very, very sweet and hot, I just know it. 0 :-)

[bethynyc.livejournal.com]

oh yes, the slow build. And maybe a misunderstanding or two. And either telling Kayla or having her see them accidentally. More snuggling on the couch?

And oh--perhaps a scene where John tells Rodney about Elizabeth, how much he loved her, and finally allows himself to grieve, because I don't think he has yet, he's been being strong for Kayla.

[wesleysgirl.livejournal.com]

Yes, yes, yes. Almost all of that is on the list. :-)

[wesleysgirl.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I have to admit that there's so much that still needs writing that adding a whole bunch of extra scenes to allow for slow build up is probably beyond me, but I added the newest pt (8) SPECIFICALLY because you asked for seduction, so I hope it helps. :-)

[yin-again.livejournal.com]

I would like lots and lots of kissing and John liking it a whole bunch. Also, John and Rodney and Kayla all snuggled up for some reason or another. Please fulfil my need for sap in whatever way you see fit. *kiss*

[wesleysgirl.livejournal.com]

Hee! I shall do my best. :-)