McShep beta?

I'm rapidly (ha ha ha! nothing is rapid anymore!) nearing the end of the McShep story I've been writing for my Trope Bingo card. Would anyone be willing to give it a read-through for me before I post it? (I can post it in my own journal whenever, right? And not post at the community that I have a completed Bingo until all 5 stories are done?)

It'll probably be about 4200 words or so.

Does anyone want to talk about their ideas for Trope Bingo? :-D

This is a very important question!

I don't know if there's canon on this, so if there is that would be awesome, but: John Sheppard likes turkey sandwiches. Mayo? Mustard? Does he like cheese? These are the important things on my mind tonight. :-P