Spn fic - Almost Normal (complete version!)

[wesleysgirl]

Okay! Here we go. I'm going to cross-post this on a couple of communities once I can sort out which are the best ones (ah, new fandom, how you make my brain hurt.)

Almost Normal
10k words, Dean/Sam, NC-17
Warnings - Dubious consent, prostitution. Also, amnesia.
Many thanks to yasminke for the beta and to zortified for the encouragement.

Comments

[dawnie1970.livejournal.com]

Oh honey, that was really good! <3

[wesleysgirl.livejournal.com]

Thank you! *Hugs*

[eponin10.livejournal.com]

supernaturalfic is one of the main communities that takes everything, and you can try the SPN Newbie guide (http://community.livejournal.com/newbieguide/13894.html), which has lists and lists of comms. :)

[wesleysgirl.livejournal.com]

Thank you! (And thank you for helping me figure out where I'd gone wrong the first time around. I think it's better now.)

[eponin10.livejournal.com]

Anytime! :) I like what you ended up with! And feel free to send along SPN stuff you need beta'd whenever you need to. :)

*points* Pretty icon, btw! Mmm... Sam.

[wesleysgirl.livejournal.com]

Isn't it pretty? *Beams*

Thank you!

[scrollgirl.livejournal.com]

Whee! Oh, that was so totally awesome! You shouldn't have had any doubts, because that was sweet and angsty and porny and all sorts of good things! Really enjoyed hooker-Sam even though this was definitely a different kind of hooker fic. Usually it's Dean who is cast as a hooker trying to pay the bills, but I really like how you link Sam's loneliness to his compliance. The amnesia made the whole thing work.

I hope you'll write more SPN!

[wesleysgirl.livejournal.com]

Thank you! :-D

[katbcoll.livejournal.com]

Yes! Oh wow! Yes... loved every freakin' word! *applauds*

[wesleysgirl.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it. :-)

[lily-liedtome.livejournal.com]

As I am pretty sure I forgot to comment on the last part, I just wanted to say that I still love this story like crazy - especially being in Sam's head, it flows so well. *grins*

[wesleysgirl.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm so glad you like it. :-)

Well done

[yasminke.livejournal.com]

Love the warnings: ... Also, amnesia. Heh.

Re: Well done

[wesleysgirl.livejournal.com]

Hee! *Smooch* Thank you so much for your help.

mmmmwah -- smooches

[yasminke.livejournal.com]

Absolutely anytime. You know where I live.

[black-bird-777.livejournal.com]

Greatly enjoyable story. Nice work!

[wesleysgirl.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much! :-)

[jacey26.livejournal.com]

That was haunting. I loved it, but was sooo worried it would end on a sad note. *phew, wipes brow*. Happy now:)

[wesleysgirl.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I very much prefer happy endings. :-)

[viciouscats.livejournal.com]

Brilliant story! I loved it to bits. :)

[wesleysgirl.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. :-)

[nemesina77.livejournal.com]

I can't even tell you how excited I am that you wrote this fic! I'm gonna go read it and then come back and squee some more!

[wesleysgirl.livejournal.com]

Thank you! :-)

[nemesina77.livejournal.com]

Really liked the comment about increased gas prices being the straw that broke the demon hunter's back! I've been thinking about how much gas the Impala must take for a full tank, and how low the miles per gallon ratio must be!

Oh and Dean living to keep Sam safe and whole! Awesome line, and so true!

I really liked how Sam was getting all itchy and when Dean just finally stopped fighting his feelings.

Very nice job!

[wesleysgirl.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much! I'm really glad it worked for you. :-D

[brynwulf]

Just finished this and loved the angstiness. Just what I needed while sick and feeling sorry for myself. :) You managed to put alot in a rather short story of this type and it worked.

[wesleysgirl.livejournal.com]

Thank you! :-D

[quarterwhore.livejournal.com]

Hi! I saw your self pimp in [Bad username or site: @ livejournal.com] and I just wanted to let you know that I re-read this fic today, and I love it more and more each time I read it.

[wesleysgirl.livejournal.com]

Aw, thank you so much. :-)

[uknoit863.livejournal.com]

Wow! No, this wasn't cracky a bit, though I did read the warnings! *grins* YAY! You put this story together very neatly - anyone who is an avid reader feels that there are only so many plot devices used and that they can predict what's going to happen next; you kept me wonderfully off-balance and leaning closer to the screen as if I could speed up to find out what was happening next! Bravo! Wonderful!

[wesleysgirl.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much! I tend to think that any fic in which "X is a prostitute" has a certain amount of crack worked into its, well, cracks. (But I don't think crack = bad. In fact, most fic I see that is labeled by the AUTHOR as crack is usually pretty good. Okay, I should stop talking now.)

[stormcloude]

I loved this story. Poor hurt Sam.

Read it some time ago and never managed to comment, but thanks for sharing it!

[wesleysgirl.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. :-)

[amalthia]

I enjoyed your story.

[wesleysgirl.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[dancetomato.livejournal.com]

I don't know what it is about my mental state, but I've been completely obsessed with J2/SPN hooker!fic lately. Imagine my delight to find one by one of my favorite authors! I saw your name and squeed. This was h/c of the finest order.

[wesleysgirl.livejournal.com]

Yay!! I'm so glad you liked it. I'm so on the fringes of Spn fandom writers that I'm pretty much invisible, so it's very exciting to get comments! *Hugs and loves*

[verucasalt123.livejournal.com]

What a fantastic story! So heartbreaking but with such a hopeful ending. Just the way I like my boys!

Oh, and gas ALMOST THREE DOLLARS A GALLON, this must be a pretty old story!!!

[wesleysgirl.livejournal.com]

LOL, you are so right! Thank you!!! :-)

[aerynsun5.livejournal.com]

Really loved this!