Last night I finally gave up on an oh-so-bad (and not in a porny good way) BB, and went scrambling for another one to help restore my faith in fanfic. Your fic has done that. Thank you!
This was a nice, easy, read. I mean that in the sense that - even though at times I would have liked less "tell" and more "show" - both the flow of your writing and the way the story pulled me in, made it hard to put down. (Which I only did once 'cus it was like 4am. LOL) My only real "complaint" is that I wanted it longer. To me this felt almost like an excerpt from a larger body of work, and there is just so much missing. Too many unanswered questions. How did this happen? What was the deal with John's death? Was he a hunter in this reality, and is Sam? (I know this was touched on, but for me it was rather confuzzling.) And Sam...what the hell is up with him? How did he die in the "wish" reality, and why did John take him away in this one??? Of course I want to know what happens next too, but that I can accept as sort of an open-ended story. The other things though, that's the kind of stuff that makes me feel like I'm missing pages of the story. Other than that, it was a good fic...and I promise you it's a compliment that I enjoyed your story enough to even want those questions answered. *wink*
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This was a nice, easy, read. I mean that in the sense that - even though at times I would have liked less "tell" and more "show" - both the flow of your writing and the way the story pulled me in, made it hard to put down. (Which I only did once 'cus it was like 4am. LOL)
My only real "complaint" is that I wanted it longer. To me this felt almost like an excerpt from a larger body of work, and there is just so much missing. Too many unanswered questions. How did this happen? What was the deal with John's death? Was he a hunter in this reality, and is Sam? (I know this was touched on, but for me it was rather confuzzling.) And Sam...what the hell is up with him? How did he die in the "wish" reality, and why did John take him away in this one??? Of course I want to know what happens next too, but that I can accept as sort of an open-ended story. The other things though, that's the kind of stuff that makes me feel like I'm missing pages of the story.
Other than that, it was a good fic...and I promise you it's a compliment that I enjoyed your story enough to even want those questions answered. *wink*