I need advice from someone who lives in London?

[wesleysgirl]

I'm working on a short story for a charity fundraiser. The story is m/m bdsm set in London and a bit of it includes enough travel on the Tube that I'd like someone who is quite familiar with London to give it a quick read and tell me where I've got things horribly wrong. The story's not done yet, but when it is, would anyone be willing?

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[torakowalski.livejournal.com]

I live in London and have been on the tube many, MANY times so I can help?

[wesleysgirl.livejournal.com]

That would be wonderful, thank you so much! I will let you know when I finish the blasted thing, LOL.

[wesleysgirl.livejournal.com]

Okay, story is finished! Is there a good place I could email it to you?

[torakowalski.livejournal.com]

Yay, yes, send it to jupiter.generation at gmail and I will take a look :)

[ephemera.livejournal.com]

sure thing, my lady. I'd be happy to :D

[wesleysgirl.livejournal.com]

Thank you!!! I'll let you know when I've finished it.

[wesleysgirl.livejournal.com]

I'm ready for you to give it a look if you're still willing... is there a good email address to send it to? :-)

[brutti-ma-buoni.livejournal.com]

Looks like you're set already, but if you need a spare I can help too!

[wesleysgirl.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much! I'll let you know if I need an extra set of eyes.