ext_72815 ([identity profile] texanfan.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] wesleysgirl 2005-09-10 10:05 pm (UTC)

Wow. Just wow.

The innate sense of hopelessness running through this is amazing. Depressing, but amazing. Makes me think of the reality of the phrase, "the living envying the dead."

The last line is so wrenching. This is the start of a rebuilding, this is the last shred of comfort before the curtain falls. Everyone's dead, nothing matters.

It was stark and compelling, beautiful and savage. thank you.

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