I'm thinking there would be no problem in adding Xander's POV. Until now, everything that's happened has been filmed within the hotel through the eyes of its primary inhabitants, including Xander's arrival (carrying Willow). [Obviously I'm seeing this in visual terms.]

Even Xander's reactions after the rape are muted. [And why does it take SO much to get him to leave?] But, if his POV is going to bring us greater clarity when he returns (even with a more involved storyline), I say do it. Perhaps you could do his POV in a different font or size? Just in case we're too clueless to get it?

Once again, I don't know if *enjoying* is the right word, but *WOW* definitely is!

Thanks,
H.