He can hear something new now. It's a steady pulsing, a soft thudding sound that creeps inside him like the ghosts and makes him feel something that's not there, something he's missing.
I love the s's and the d sounds in this sentence. Really makes you feel the pulse.
The room on the other side stretches out like a rubber band...
That's an amazing metaphor... Very cool.
I like how touching Xander makes all the voices quiet down for a moment...if only for a moment. ;)
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He can hear something new now. It's a steady pulsing, a soft thudding sound that creeps inside him like the ghosts and makes him feel something that's not there, something he's missing.
I love the s's and the d sounds in this sentence. Really makes you feel the pulse.
The room on the other side stretches out like a rubber band...
That's an amazing metaphor... Very cool.
I like how touching Xander makes all the voices quiet down for a moment...if only for a moment. ;)