Oh, this is a real emotional roller coaster! You had me hooked and laughing out loud at Ronon's "S'called Pride". Just the idea of all of them at the parade is deliciously hilarious. Then I was giggling helplessly over John's and Rodney's reaction to Teyla's request and their inability to talk about their relationship & feelings. John's thoughts about Rodney's snoring and their coming-out to their friends made me go Awwwww. Therefore Rodney's poisoning was even more unsettling.
The following crossover is wonderfully balanced. I especially love that John is rescuing Rodney, while Sam and Dean are just providing the tools.
I also like that you point out how both Rodney and Dean have the same fears of being rebuffed and left behind.
Your subtle way of sneaking Ethan Rayne in the story made me guffaw, because this would be so up his alley. :)
The last scene left me happy and with a chuckle on my lips as it's spot-on Rodney & John, like everyone is in character throughout your story.
Thank you so much for writing me this! It's so much more than I could have imagined with the meager prompt you had. <3
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The following crossover is wonderfully balanced. I especially love that John is rescuing Rodney, while Sam and Dean are just providing the tools.
I also like that you point out how both Rodney and Dean have the same fears of being rebuffed and left behind.
Your subtle way of sneaking Ethan Rayne in the story made me guffaw, because this would be so up his alley. :)
The last scene left me happy and with a chuckle on my lips as it's spot-on Rodney & John, like everyone is in character throughout your story.
Thank you so much for writing me this! It's so much more than I could have imagined with the meager prompt you had. <3